
Sunrise and the Seven One Six

Very lovely and joyful story. Although, the cheesiness overwhelmed me, must be because I'm not used to reading this particular genre before.
Like
-Writing style.
-Unexpected ending
-Details about the military (The research was very well - done, by the way).
-The "Tim on the bus" chapter. Poor Tim but that was hilarious.
Dislike
-Love triangle (Again, this must be me, since I'm not very fond of it).
-Cliché
Also, this is not worth mentioning, but there are typos on:
-pg 74, line 5.
-pg 80, line 29.
-pg 107, last line?